Good emotion. it shows your hurt and pain. i enjoyed it. its a sad piece. keep up the good work

This was a sad poem. It had good emotion in it and I loved it. The rhyme was good and so was the layout of the poem. This poem really spoke to me though. I actually have never even met my dad. Well anyways good job.

Wow, that's great. The emotion is absolutely wonderful. The flow was good, but off in some places. I like the rhyme scheme you chose. And the vocabulary you chose works very well.

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This poem descibes perfectly the lost love between a daughter and dad the emotion was great the rythem was a bit rocky but was good great poem

well done

Oh wow such emotions and i felt hate and anger here while reading it. sorta can relate all i want is a dandy who is true as well but i dnt get one but either way i have mi madre and that just the only parent i need. i love it.
5/5

Take CaRe,
Frenchy

My dad is the same. i can really feel the saddness and the tears are running down my cheek as i read it. realy good job. i like have the first and last lines of the stanza rhymes with the whole thing good job.

Great
the passion was....moving
loved it
keep writing!!!!

This is an outstanding poem, it brought me to tears.
Mostly because I can relate to this poem alot if you are talking about drug addiction, and it's so sad how true it is. :(

This is amazing, well done.