Embraced With Serenity.

I felt like someone was giving me a warm hug while I was reading this poem.
I really enjoyed this piece Temps, Though I don't know why didn't you post it in the about nature poems..
Anyway, Loved the simplicity and the wording :)
I only think you need some more metaphors to strengthen the poem, to make it more beautiful.
Lovely one hun, thank you for this =)
Keep them coming~

Guess you're talking about a giraffe here? I just got that from the 'long legs' and the 'elongated neck'.

To be honest Temps there's much to say about this poem; because you're basically describing an animal in poetic form. I can tell you though, I liked the calm tone of this poem, and I loved the subtle rhyme in the second stanza. It's a well written poem, and whilst it's not really original or emotive, it's just...nicely written. Advice for you though; you could have..got inside the mind a bit more, gave it more character. Minor typo on 'nostrils' by the way haha. But yeah, you could have give the animal a personality, because it's quite a physical poem. Add to it, I know people dont like going back to poems but you should if you actually wanna be a writer. Mess around with it. Keep what you have but give it more depth.

Verse one could be about a horse or a dog and the second verse sounds like your dog you had writtent about. It will have to be readers choice since you have given a sense of mystery to this poem.

Temps,

I liked the ears flopping free bit, that sounded so cheerful:)
Is this about you dog, or about a horse? I am not sure..
It was indeed a serene poem, though:)

*hugs*

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