by Michael D Nalley Apr 18, 2009
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Broken covenants, broken vows, |
by Cantchangeme
Another really good poem |
by Kaila
The rhyming was well done, and it gave a good rhythm to the poem. I'm not sure why the first stanza all started the same and the others didn't? Just my questioning though |
by Jad
That was an awesome poem. The rhyme was pretty good and it had a good flow. This poem was true though. For He has come and washed away and restored the covenant. 5/5 |