A powerful poem i liked the imagery of it - it had good rythem and emotion

well done

Thyis one was good, but could've been better. (Though every poem in the world could probably be better than it is.) I think that it was excellent until the last line, I really didn't like it. I was expecting more I guess. And it just didn't flow that well. The rest of th flow was good, and I like thewhole idea of the poem. So good job.

Soda E>

Another good poem with good imagery. I loved this one. the rhyme was good and your flow as it always seems is excellant. Good job.

Wow this was an amzing poem. i can relate to it. and so has many can. being broken again after again it seems like we are numb to the pain at times but yet we still have pain. i like it. one of my favorite so far i have read.
for me 5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

I have been interested in Deja vu from the firt time I experieced it and love how you applied it to romantic disappointment here with excelent rhythm and rhyme