Honeymoon Morn' (Musette)

by Mr. Darcy   Apr 18, 2009


Dawn breaks
From bird-song dreams
I wake

My wife
Asleep so still.
Our life

So fine
Her blue eyes smile
At mine

The Musette, created by Emily Romano is a poem that consists of three verses of three lines
each. The first lines have two syllables; the second lines have four syllables, and the third lines
have two syllables. The rhyme scheme is a/b/a for the first verse; c/d/c for the second verse,
and e/f/e for the third verse. The title should reflect the poem's content

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A beautiful form, you have created such a passionate scene here. The love and imagery portrayed was immense, and in such few words you have clearly got your point and meaning across, while satisfying the reader still. The wording was flawless, no suggestions at all. You have truly shown us the beauty of being in love and spending your time with them. Well done, a true masterpiece.

    5/5 from me, take care and God Bless!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Waking with the one you love is a wonderful thing. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This created an image of absolute bliss in my mind. It is heaven to wake up next to the one you love and see the sun rise, the birds sing.....I guess we are both romantics at heart, dear friend!

    ((hugs)) xx

    5/5 Ingrid

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