This created an image of absolute bliss in my mind. It is heaven to wake up next to the one you love and see the sun rise, the birds sing.....I guess we are both romantics at heart, dear friend!

((hugs)) xx

5/5 Ingrid

Waking with the one you love is a wonderful thing. Well done.

A beautiful form, you have created such a passionate scene here. The love and imagery portrayed was immense, and in such few words you have clearly got your point and meaning across, while satisfying the reader still. The wording was flawless, no suggestions at all. You have truly shown us the beauty of being in love and spending your time with them. Well done, a true masterpiece.

5/5 from me, take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne