:) This was very good, Chelsey. :)

<Those moments I tried so very hard
To make you feel like you're the best>

^^ that was so beautifully penned, in my opinion. The way I read it in my mind just made my heart skip a beat. Very beautiful.

5/5

Bri~

I thought this was very good and i liked it, wat u r saying is so very truthful...nice job putting it down on words...

Chels I feel for you hunny. First love is so hard and it feels as though everything is crashing down on you. I've lived those days too hun ... and they are not one bit fun.
Time will help hun ... I can't say time heals ll because I know for fact now that it really truly doesn't ... but it sure makes things much easier.

If he is the right one Chels ... you will both find your way back to each other.

Stay strong AID .... and if ya need to talk, I am always here for ya Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

I loved this poem..it was beautiful written and truly captured the essence of the first lost love..that we all havetoo experience at one point in our life..

I ecpesially loved the ending:

"I just don't know if I can take it
Not knowing if we were meant to be
Not knowing who your next girl is
Confused how she'll be better than me"

This part took up an interesting question..one doesn`t always move on to better things, and sometimes we regret our choices..

Great job..keep it up ;)