by Beautiful Chaos Apr 19, 2009
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Familiar lines and slopes |
by Tom Swart
I liked this too. I always have a fondness for poems that don't rhyme liike most of mine. That opens the limits to the poem and lets it run free of the shackles of "having to rhyme" mindlessly. Nice job bud - keep up the good writes and be sure to keep your pen close at hand in case thoughts come quickly that need to find themselves on paper. may peace and hope find a harbor in your poems. |