Comments : Cold Hearted.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Steve
    What a intense piece. you have painted a very sad picture here.

    Cold like beaten iron
    without any feelings of remorse,
    your mind is shut and closed
    and so is your heart.

    Some people onlly see things their way and never bother to view it from anothers shoes.

    Cruel intentions dwell in your soul
    from where the hate oozes forth
    like a demon who will
    welcome death and decay.

    It is sad to see someone get pleasure from crushing the feelings of others.

    Your slanted view on life, so
    filled with dark and bitter
    desires to kill off ties you
    once had.

    All you can do for a person like this is hope that one day their heart will change.

    Great job!
    Love and hugs
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    People like this are so very sad. The saddest thing is that they never realize just how they are, even when they may see that there is no one around and they are alone. Well written.