Unknown Reasons

Good job. This poem was awesome and the flow was good and so was the rhyme. The emotion in the poem is good as well. Another well written piece.

"I see your empty silhouette,
and I know I'll never forget;
I wonder if you feel regret,
Such as that we feel upset."

-I really like your use of the word "silhouette" in this stanza. It's beautiful. Combined with the second line, I wanted to cry.

"I think about the time we shared,
Never thought you were despaired.
Your thoughts were impaired,
For this we were unprepared."

-I think your last line could have been better.

"I remember our interactions,
And now hate the distractions.
You never considered our reactions;
A most serious infraction."

-Again, the last line didn't really impress me.

"And now you left me here alone,
Considering your reasoning, unknown."

-I like how you ended this poem.

Good job.

This was one of my favorites and one of your best i think. I loved the imagery and the diction you used was strong. Ylur style is different from mine, but I still enjoyed it. You should write more like this. Shanik

Very touching and heartbreaking it is. to lose a friend to lose a love one. i havent lost one this way n i dnt ever want to. but losing a friend has walking out of my life i have and it hurt has a mother fudger i cant relate to ur feeling but im trulie sorry.

TaKe CaRe Always,
Frenchy

This was moving, I am sry for your friends death, its a sad event indeed. I am very touched, i know the pain of loss has much has the next and this poem was very accurate to that feeling. confused, abandoned, a little angry and over all very much alone. I comend your write, and morn at your loss.