This was a moving write, sad, touching and it was wrapped up nicely. |
by Clown
This was moving, I am sry for your friends death, its a sad event indeed. I am very touched, i know the pain of loss has much has the next and this poem was very accurate to that feeling. confused, abandoned, a little angry and over all very much alone. I comend your write, and morn at your loss. |
Very touching and heartbreaking it is. to lose a friend to lose a love one. i havent lost one this way n i dnt ever want to. but losing a friend has walking out of my life i have and it hurt has a mother fudger i cant relate to ur feeling but im trulie sorry. |
by Lady Nik
This was one of my favorites and one of your best i think. I loved the imagery and the diction you used was strong. Ylur style is different from mine, but I still enjoyed it. You should write more like this. Shanik |
by Atomic
"I see your empty silhouette, |
by Jad
Good job. This poem was awesome and the flow was good and so was the rhyme. The emotion in the poem is good as well. Another well written piece. |