by Pam Apr 19, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Sometimes I wonder, |
I like the idea of this write, the beginning as it worked off to it's end. I personally think that this could have been written better. Some cliche lines as well as the ryhtym was off. But I definitely hope to see more from you, especially the way you spell out the truth, and there are moments of this poem that truly shine. |