It is sad and the poem itself gives me a sense of stillness when I read it. Well done.

This is so beautifullly crafted! I loved the format and you got the message across in such a profound way..It's awfull to be left alone, one of the hardest things in life to cope with.

A beautiful write, hats off.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Raj
You did an awesome job with this form. The sadness can be felt in the words you chose.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Vey well written. A very short form yet painted vivid sadness nad loneliness.. Ive read some of your works and i can honestly say, they are awesome.. I liked the pattern and the adjectives you used, supporting every second stanzas that is if im not mistaken..First it was about the smile then 2nd stanza was about the night..Well elaborated in just few words..Deep and touching..Very expressive, few words most of the times means more than anything.Good job..

Great use of wisdom to create such an amazing poem

A thought provoking piece. Excellent job adhering to the rules of this form. I haven't seen this form before, it has an interesting structure.