I truly like this poem. It screams the truth in the face of those who do not want to see

Great emotions and dynamics in this poem. I like the way you counted his life down with the number of pills.

Thats good i like the fact that u can read it more that one way and kinda get a new meaning out of it

Seventeen pills, I begin to weep
Eighteen pills, for eternal sleep
Nineteen pills, with tears in my eyes
Twenty pills, my last goodbye

^^ Thats my fav stanza, its the perfect end to a great poem. It wraps its up very well. I liked how it was so original. Your choice of wording went well with this poem and your rhyme scheme wasnt forced. A very sad and intense write, but youve done an excellent job. Great work, 5/5.

Wow - intense. i liked this very much - reminded me of past times - mistakes. remembering that to what life i have now i can see how far i have came.

good work angel

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Holy crap! I love this one!