In Denial ( Fibonacci)

by Ingrid   Apr 20, 2009


In Denial ( Fibonacci)

In
you
I found
a soul mate.
Then you denied us,
demonized me for loving you.

Echoes haunt the desolate shore
of my dreamscape land.
Happiness
never
was
real.

**Fibonacci
The number of syllables in each line must equal the sum of the syllables in the two previous lines. So, start with 0 and 1, add them together to get your next number, which is also 1, 2 comes next, then add 2 and 1 to get 3, and so on. Fibonnaci: 0, 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8, 13, ... Poetry: 1 syllable, 1 syllable, 2 syllables, 3 syllables, 5 syllables, 8 syllables, 13 syllables, 21 syllables...

My inspiration to use this format came from this lady:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1117643

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    I like your different poems in different forms, you have taught me a new form here which I would like to practice.

    Well done, keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Ingrid...you are a phenomenal woman.. I am sorry I didnt re comment again..and am sorry for myself that I didnt give my soul words like urs..to dive in..

    aint this just a very sad.a very true poem to relate to ?
    whats more sad than a love that held so many dreams..and then shattered down just like the untrue happiness
    of our world..

    5/5
    incredible u

  • 15 years ago

    by anand singh

    A sad but beautiful write.Your choice of words chosen well and the depth and meaning quite vivid.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 15 years ago

    by Gizmo

    This is a unique style and one i haven't seen before very clever in deed. its an emotional poem, and you can feel that from the first sentence 'in you i found a soul mate.' normally this would start off in a love poem but its such a slap in the face with ethe following line 'then you denied us.. thats a blunt and strong sentence to follow.
    you also end on a very blunt point that happiness never was real, and again blunt to the point and not wordly.
    i loved the simplicity of this form as well as your wording, it was eaily read. i even liked the little metaphor on the second stanza, gives it a little more 'kick up the backside'.

    i have absolutely no faults with this.

    so round of applause and again i loved the style xx

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Simply beautiful.

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