I love the 2en stanza. this poem is very well flowing. very well done. an awsome poem.

Wow, you have some very profound thoughts going on here. You have done a great job with the poem. I enjoyed the read very much.
Take Care,
Kay

Great job on this piece....takes me back about 20 years. Very deep and intense.
Take Care
Cindy

Wow. I loved that.

Within every circle death will and can be found,
-- Really powerful. Made a great impact.

Cayce