I came up with the firs line when I was out smoking.
--- Nice Mark. XD

darkness walks beside his side
--- Haha, that line was hard to say.. but I liked it a lot. :]

I loved how it all flowed together really well. I write poems where I don't know what they mean alllll the time. They just pop into my head. I think the word choice really made this a good poem.. and yeah. It was good. XD

Yay, go Mark! :]

Cayce.

Vary good poem,prety good even flow to.
I like poms with depth tho. I feel you could of gone deeper with it if you could of waited for it it could of grown.