Comments : Fusion

  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    Come with me, lets run away
    Paths are long, but seldom straight
    Together we'll take it on
    We're just to right to be wrong
    ^^^
    Jenn I love this ending stanza so much !!!!!

    This read so beautiful that I can imagine the words set to music ...

    Excellent read Jenn !!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    What a beautiful free verse. Proof that all good poems don't have to rhyme. Pure, raw emotion and a joy to read.