More Than Enough

by Lady Nik   Apr 21, 2009


The words I love you
Echo in the pit of my heart
Like an angel
Rising from the dark.
With wings of gold
And eyes of blue
Lips that taste like honey
Reminding me of you.

Like the first snow flake
Of winter
Ice covered dreams
Why wouldn't I remember?
The kisses on my cheek
And the smiles on my face
The warmth in my soul
And the breath you take away.

With your arms around me
Bringing me closer to your chest
Forever I will close my eyes
And there I shall rest.
And as I sleep
You existence whispers to me
Our future together
Your whispers help me see.

My walls are down
And you've walked in
I melt in your presence
Where do I begin?
My knees are weak
And my voice is faint
My body trembles
When you say my name.

Lost I am
Whenever you speak
Like a treasure
Our love is unique.
Unlike the rest
I will fight for us
For your touch is beautiful
And you trust is more than enough.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I feel like this poem is a wonderful message to all lovers out there. The way you put it together, the imagery the power behind it truly shined. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    Such a beautiful love poem.. i thought it flowed great. and its refreshing to read about true love, not heartbreak. love it, keep it up :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    Love the flow of it... love it!

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This peom is soo sweet. i love the description and how it flows so beautifully. it makes me think how love should really be and how i want tht in my life. thanks for opening my eyes.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    A couple of lines are too short and throw of the melodic flow you've got going on .. And it's really cliche , but I like how even if some lines aren't perfect rhymes they still fit really well . I think this is really fantastic , but maybe using a stronger vocabulary and more original ideas would help . 5/5

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