This was a awesome poem. I hope that your dad gets out soon or when its his time. Sorry though. Well at any rate the emotion in the poem was obvious and the flow was good though it didn't seem to be a structure poem. The rhyme was good as well. So for the most part this was a good heart filled poem.

I think its really good... i love how you kept going back to the first verse and how you ended the poem... awesome! 5/5