Very romantice.

I see my heart, lit by candle light
sweet serenity within his arms
absolute clarity with his insight
contented sighs with his charms

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I love how you start with a more romantic, calm tone... It really pulls the reader in.

cascading love flow down my breast
the taste of his milk, on my lips
oh, his words unbearably intense
with his body between my very hips

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Wow!! Sounds wonderful! I love the use of metaphors and imagery in this stanza. Very well written hun.

gentle fingertips trace my cheek
as his firm grasp hold me to him
heavy gasps continue to increase
as i feel every inch from within

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Now this stanza really makes the reader think, I love how you used a more erotic stanza towards the end. This really makes the reader want more. :)

my body quakes with glorious spasms
his heart beats to the rhythm of mine
he lays his weary head upon my bosom
as we slip into unconsciousness divine

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You end as you end in the poem, peacefully and beautifully. Your wording is very well thought out, and you ended with such class.. I love poems that end with the title.

5/5
Well Done.