Beautiful Morn(Etheree)

Great job on this form. Beautiful, vivid imagery. I love the word choice. Excellent!

Raj,
How beautiful my dear. The imagery you provide in such an exquisite piece of work is amazing. I could envision the beauty and feel the warmth of the sunbeams. Oh how beautiful. Marvelous Job

"Dews
shimmer"
`Couldnt you just say "dew" I dont see why it would have to be plural here. I did really love your way of describing the dew, how it shimmer.. I can imagine this vividly.

"as sunbeams
sprinkle warmth on"
`What gorgeous word choice this poem has. I loved sprinkle that just added a lot to the poem, and how the sun beams down.. unique way of thinking of this!

"sleepy canvas of
tangerine horizon;"
`Woow.. the sun is apperently rising, I can imagine the sun peaking above the horizon, really loved the word sleepy and tangerine.. just absolutely perfect to describe a beautiful morning.

"blinking, yawning milieu wakes,
feathers flutter higher, chirping"
`Loved your alliteration with 'feathers flutter' .. I can now hear these birds awake and chirping to start a new morning.

"a song of life, dancing to the tune
that embraces another beautiful morn."
`Your Etheree was just overflowing with beautiful imagery. You put us in this place and let us vividly imagine this ourselves like you did. Your last line seems to have 11 syllables however - but thats the only thing I can see wrong with this part.

Very beautiful Etheree.

5/5.

Temps [Beyond a Poets Mind]

This is exquisite! The words are so vibrant and bring the day alive! Excellent writing.

Hey Raj,

Another awesome piece though i have to admit to one reality. If you could see so much beauty around you then its not just the magic of nature but also the beauty thats inside you.
Awesome write dear

all the best and take care