Perfect ( Not )

by emily mackay   Apr 22, 2009


Stars are there to be enlightend
& light up a special life
granted by the wish
of a stolen blooded knife

caught between a fire
deep within a mind
blowing different whistles
of plentant family time

sat at a round table
with dinner on each end
crowed by a photograph
perfect one to send

chats about memeorys
of past present or now
please pass the potatos
its kinda real somehow

but across the wooden table
lies a dead hearted girl
who mind is kind of mistaken
lost up inside a twhirl

so when the talk has endded
and the knife has been washed clean
the wounds in which have been created
will never ever be seen.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    This was a sad poem, using a simple and even cliche story to portray yet another simple emotion. It was simplistic, though the ending was absolutely birlliant.

    'so when the talk has endded
    and the knife has been washed clean
    the wounds in which have been created
    will never ever be seen. '

    ^I absolutely love this stanza. The flow is perfection, and the words create such a splendid metaphor. Nicely Written.