The Guns Were Fired

by Lilly Tagloff   Apr 22, 2009


It was just a normal day,
For kids from Columbine High,
But two teens had something planned.
This was their last goodbye.

It wasn't just a fluke that morn'
For these kids anyway.
They planned for almost an entire year,
And wrote of hatred each day.

Then on that one Tuesday in April,
The 20th to be exact.
It was the anniversary of Hitler's birthday.
Did that have an impact?

No one really had a clue
Of what was going on.
Most of the students thought it was a joke,
Until their friends were gone.

While the culprits planted their bombs
And shot everyone in sight,
Everyone fled to hiding spots,
But it was not alright.

One of the plotters found a girl,
She hid like shy pray.
"Would you like to die?" he said,
But, she did not want to play.

They shot all the ones they hated,
The popular, the athletes, the geeks.
And with their guns, they made the choice
Of who was to live, or so to speak.

After all the damage was done,
Parents rushed to school.
They hoped to find their kids were safe.
It wasn't April Fools.

Many lives were lost that day,
The day two teens showed hate.
It was full of horror and sadness,
For those who were the bait...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    I really liked this. It had a good flow that kept me comfortably reading, and a good idea that made me want to keep reading. I'm actually kind of confused here by:
    "And with their guns, they made the choice
    Of who was to live, or so to speak."

    Do you mean that they killed them with guns? Or killed them on the 'inside'? I also don't think that mentioning Hitler's birthday as any kind of real impact on this poem. It seems kind of like additional words; a little out of place. But if it's based on a true story I guess it would be pretty good and it would have an effect on people who have heard about this.

    "One of the plotters found a girl,
    She hid like shy pray."
    ^This second line also seems kind of uncomfortable. As in it makes sense, it's a good idea however the wording makes it a little awkward. I think it has too little syllables. Otherwise, it was good. ^^

  • 14 years ago

    by Alex D

    Very powerful. very good approach to a sad subject. It was moving and still informative. 5/5