by mrsmoore Apr 23, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Deceptive illusion |
by Nicko
This has a softness of spirit that i like.. It flows off the tongue with good rhyme and meter...nice work |
by damont
Lovely poem and the title made me want to read it and your flow is really nice. wonderful poem keep writing |
I cannot find a thing I would change Your rhythm and rhyme paints a vivid portrait |