by xXHunnyGurlXx Apr 23, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I love you I whisper, |
by Saving Grace
Wow, sounded like you were writing about what just happened to me. Can really relate. Anyway, i really liked it. I think the flow in some places are slightly off, but that could just be the way im reading it. The rhyme scheme was good, not forced, just simple, i liked that. Keep it up. xx |