Her.

by xXHunnyGurlXx   Apr 23, 2009


I love you I whisper,
As you wrapped your arms around my waist,
I reach up on my toes,
To give your lips the slightest taste,
Forever is all that you had said,
That night,
When we were together,
And everything felt right,
But months pass,
And seasons change,
Who would have thought my love,
Could have caused such pain.
I thought we would last forever,
Nothing could go wrong,
Because my love for you,
Was way to strong,
But then she came & took you away,
It broke my heart,
& all I ever wanted,
Was for you to stay.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow, sounded like you were writing about what just happened to me. Can really relate. Anyway, i really liked it. I think the flow in some places are slightly off, but that could just be the way im reading it. The rhyme scheme was good, not forced, just simple, i liked that. Keep it up. xx