Comments : My Dusk And Summer Girl

  • 15 years ago

    by Alicia

    Aw, this was really bitter sweet. I could get the "unrequited love" vibe, hence the bitterness. I loved it!
    This line kind of cracked me up.

    "I sleep outside listening to your whispers,
    Wakeing as I do, breaking a sweat.
    So close."

    Kinda stalkerish, but still amazing. ^_^
    Awesome job! 5/5