by Suicidal Love Apr 23, 2009
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Winter's been sacked, |
by Maple Tree
Now this piece is very unique, and i really enjoyed ~ there is humor, beauty and a creative splash of words.... very nice ! |
by Grunge Angel
As I read this...I became more and more amused at the changing desciption of Winter. By the end I was laughing a bit, and the last stanza in my opinion was great. Perfect way to end a poem. Great job! |
by Good Enough
This poem is really cute :) i liked it |
by flutterflies
Your repetition of : Winter's been sacked is very effective. You can tell that it was written as a younger person. The sentence structure shows it, although you wrote much better then I did. |