by BlueEyedMystery Apr 23, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
The glow swirled around her, |
by Jad
The same as what Annaam said. this was a terrific poem and the rhyming and flow of the poem was good. The emotion was really good to. The imagery is really good in this poem. Good job. |
by Annaam
WOww... It's very deep, filled with strOng emOtiOns that I cOuld really feel as I read each line! The rhyming is perfect... And I love the imagery it creates.. |