WOww... It's very deep, filled with strOng emOtiOns that I cOuld really feel as I read each line! The rhyming is perfect... And I love the imagery it creates..

U've dOne an excellent jOb here..
5/5 ! :)

The same as what Annaam said. this was a terrific poem and the rhyming and flow of the poem was good. The emotion was really good to. The imagery is really good in this poem. Good job.