Omg... I am in LOve with it. The end is sO sad and yet sO beautiful...!

``You see this is an all new fairytale, referring to it's never to late
--> It's never 'too' late

``What wasn't obvious to there selves
--> 'TheMselves'

``But was afraid to not have there before
--> I dOnt really understand this One.. :|

``Who knew loving someone could make things so awkward
To afraid to lose what they had, they never moved forward
Neither could sleep at night, for reality was better then a dream
They waited till the end of forever, or maybe thats just how it seemed
--> I just LOVE this One! :)

``Years went by each left there home town, still staying in touch
--> .. each left 'theIR' hometown..

``Many more years passed, the girls dream became real, now a poet and no less a writer
She decided hands down, how things worked out 5 years before was better
She says she no longer loves him, little did she know in everything she wrote
Clues of him lingered, his smile, his eyes, his love, and every word he spoke
--> 1st line: '.. the girl's...'
LOve the last 2 lines!

``He hated his self for not seeing if they could of been more....
--> Hated 'hIMself' .. cOuld 'have'...

``Two bodies found laying on the blacktop all alone
Hand in hand finally to find there true home
And what they said in there final moments one will forever guess
Maybe they said it all, maybe nothing but a final kiss
--> 2nd line: ..to find 'theIR' true..
3rd line: ..in theIR final...

``And me I somehow always knew
There last words where I love you
--> DO yOu think it' wOuld sOund better with 'As fOr me, I sOmehOw always knew' ?
Last line: TheIR.

SOrry fOr making it sO lOng, but cOrrecting those little errOrs will make it perfect!
Excellent Write! :)

5/5 :).