Comments : Well, do we? (Quinzane)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    If we don't, we should. So few words to convey a powerful message.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Michael,

    I was very surprised when I found this, he he.
    It think you can imagine why:)
    We should care, indeed we should care...before it's too late!
    You aced the format;)

    ((hugs)) xx

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    The title caught my attention and made me eager to read! I havent see much of this form before and I really did enjoy it. You said so much in so little words and the depth here was filled with an immense amount of power. This is a topic many people ignore although its obvious that its happening, people should just open their eyes and see whats going on around them and help save this earth we live in. It doesnt even take that much...the smallest deed by each person can make a great deal of change.

    Great choice of a topic that I can go on for hours about haha.

    "Polar caps cry to the sea."
    ^I loved it! The personification was flawless and it truly is a cry...the question is does anybody hear? They better open their ears sometime soon!

    Well done!
    *5/5*

    :]

  • 15 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    Haha A Quinzane.

    I rather enjoy these poems. =]
    Very creative, and a wonderful use of personification. Very well done my Leige.

    Yours Truly,
    Elizabeth H.