by Raychil Apr 25, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
When you open a scab |
by Lori
This is so unbelievably impressive. I love how you compared the pain in life to the pain in a scab. That really quite brilliant! And like nothing I have ever read in in my ife. You are really quite talented Rachel :) I really enjoyed this. It also gave off a sense of uniqueness in it. It's what makes it Rachels poem. :) |
by Amberinaa
Very different, I never read a poem abot scabs before. Im impressed its very creative and flowed great. Kept my attention and also made me think. |