MaryAnne,

These ice storms and other really violent nature events can take so many lives and destroy all one has built in a life time.
I think you did really well on this. It read like a script to a movie, but ever so sad...

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Nice poem..Was really sad to read, though it made a lot of sense. I loved it! 5/5 Deffinately!

Keep up the good work.
-Ally

Very vivid story. This tragic story comes alive here. Good poem.