Well John..this certainly is a very deep Haiku!
You impressed me deeply..hats off for you, my friend.

It did make me a little sad reading it, I could see it in front of me, such a gloomy picture..

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

A short but good poem Mr B,
5/5

John as always you seem to posess that special something to say so much in a few lines. Your words are always magical and this brings a hint of sadness. I loved the title as well. Awesom Job!

Very thought provoking, And it's as though it's understandable at the same time - though I couldn't tell you exactly what it means! Sort of like Jabberwocky!

Perhaps the best haiku I've read on here... So deep for 3 little lines.

Great work and thanks for sharing! :)