by Sylvia Apr 26, 2009
category :
Life, society /
other
What secrets do you know? |
by anand singh
The imagery and the story behind it is well portrayed. |
by Dreamofolwin
I really loved this poem Cindy. It is full of memories and emotions, lol. The words "faded by loneliness" and "the empty seat" especially touched my heart..as they reminded me of a song my mother used to sing called "sitting alone in an old rocking chair." Excellent write. |
Oh Sylvia this was such a touching piece. I have thought of writing along the same subject but never could pen something that fit. You have done an outstanding job on this and brought to life memories of my childhood and young adulthood. Thanks. |
Very Nicely Penned!!! |
by Corinne
Sylvia - This is wonderful! I love the personification of the chair and the image of children sitting in its lap - and the idea that the color has faded from loneliness. |