The quotes are perfectly woven into the deep theme of this eloquently penned poem

Excellent write Lisa, the flow was flawless. I really liked the way you worded this and your choice of words was perfect. Good luck on the contest. ;]

Peace, Joe

That was a pretty well written piece of work. I noticed the quotes as I was reading which made it interesting. Although I won't give a huge analysis of the poem, I must say I did enjoy reading it. The quotes added onto the edgy topic sort of gave it an "epic" type of feel, for me at least. Good job, keep writing.

Stunning poem Lisa, your wording and flow were right on target and I thought this was a very unique and interesting poem to read. I'm glad I read it, take care and keep up the excellent work!

5/5 from me, good luck with the contest!

God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

I thought this piece was very interesting, your wording was flawless =] The structure of poem suited the flow perfectly! Te quotes you used fitted in very well with your style,oveall a really good write 5/5