Take Me Away
by In_my_own_shadow Jun 12, 2004
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I cant handle this confusion...why cant you take me away? I feel so much better when we are together, but so miserable when you are away. I want to fly...fly like a bird. Please, take me away, take to to whatever place you've been hiding all of these years.I don't want to feel the pain;the pain that I felt when you first left me--I just cant handle it.. I dream about you constantly...when I see you, I cry because you always leave me. All I want is to be with you--Do you know how it feels to be pushed around by others;having only one person that cares about you...and one day, that person just gives up? I do. |
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20 years ago
by LeAnNe
Hey,
I really like this poem! I know what it's like to be in that kinda of situation and it most definitely is not fun. It's a very difficult thing to have to go through. Very good poem though! I've read most of yours and I'd have to say this is the best in my opinion!
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If you could check out some of my stuff, I'd really appreciate it! Thanks!
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20 years ago
by SarZz
WOW....i read it again....its really very gud!>....wow!....ill give it a ~*~5~*~
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20 years ago
by SarZz
a very well written piece o writing!
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20 years ago
i liked this one, I gave it a 5.
