Wow really nice work. i love how you made it flow so easily. i also liked the rhyming. i can only imagine living in a world of darkness and blackness. through my eyes everything is gray. i loved it

This was a wonderfully written poem. You repeated the first verse, and yet you changed the smallest of details and yet changed it's meaning. A thought provoking write. Well Done.

"Darkness calls,
It pulls me in,
I try to stall
But darkness wins.
Right from wrong,
Wrong from right,
I don't care;
I've lost the fight."

These lines really hit home with me mostly because I'm usually a loner and am constantly shunned by other people. So it's greatly relate to me and others like me, if any.