AMAZING I REALLY INJOYED IT.

KEEP UP THE AMAZING WORK:)

Again its an amazing poem
Keep it up

A Message to Eva and Adam
by Alone

Once upon a time when the world was so calm
Adam and Eva were enjoying the charms
They never wonder about the flaws
And what was going to start?

Babies were being born on day and night
The result was heading for fight
They never wondered about the flaws
And what was going to start?

Now the Billions of people in this world
world with hundreds countries.
Countries with hundred borders.
Borders with thousands soldiers.
Soldiers with different uniforms

O Eva!
Your children are fighting with each other
and lost their humanity in wars
they are bathing in each others blood
to occupy the land where you stayed
in the shadow of ignorance

O Adam!
The ignorance killed their innocence
The power killed their justice
The wealth killed their pettiness
Very few remains with politeness
now the world become battle field

O Eva and Adam!
sadness filled my heart to say that
This is the present of your children!!

Pityness is a rare spelling if in fact it is in the english dictionary

My eyes collide head-on with stuffed graveyards
False gods, I scuff
At pettiness which plays so rough
Walk upside-down inside handcuffs
Kick my legs to crash it off
Say okay, I have had enough
What else can you show me?

I know Im late in commenting, but let me tell u,
the idea is AMAZING:) 5/5

Wow tia is very true and very very good :) 5/5

Both true and sad you watch movies about war and the only thing it is is just one person who prays to GOD for strength to live through the war so he can be with his family again and then the next day he goes and kills someone who made the same prayer he did