I absolutely love, love love the ending. The pure and simple repitition you placed at the end was used in such a way that it was able to capture my attention and at the same time finished it beautifully. This was a great concept, far from the cliche usages of words and metaphors, it was a great poem. There were small parts were the flow was a bit off, but even that didn't draw my attention away from this poem. 5/5

There's a few grammar and punctuation errors, but I still gave this a 5/5. I love winter settings; it's the perfect catharsis, when you feel isolated or want to be alone. Great job :)