In such short time..

by xXHunnyGurlXx   Apr 28, 2009


Hunny do you hear me?
Hunny do you care?
Im waiting for you darling,
This really isnt fair.

I was oh, so good to you,
And you left me behind,
Sitting here waiting,
With forever passing time.

You followed him,
You really should of stayed,
He put your life at risk then,
They took you away.

It really aint that tempting,
You could of stayed behind,
You were not as strong as him,
Were you really that blind?

They were so evil,
But he was young & strong,
You could not keep up that night,
But you still went along,

They took your life,
& I couldnt sleep for days,
I want back that love you gave,
The love I always crave.

But that was not the end of it,
I loved him to you see,
You both were in such danger,
& you wouldnt leave it be.

But it wasnt them that took him,
It was others oh so bad,
One little shot is all it took,
To really make me mad.

I lost you both in such short time,
Will I ever feel the same?
Sharp, hot burning feelings,
That shall never be tamed.

**
This poem is dedicated to my two past dogs, One in which (Hunny 11) I had had for 8 years & she was taken by kangaroos.. after following our new pup (Rusty 1) across the road, After her death he was shot by pound men a week b4 his 2nd birthday, as he was classed as a threat to our widlife...

I will miss them both dearly. <3

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  • 15 years ago

    by Corruption

    Wow im sorry...
    and your comment on your own poem helped me understand this poem alot more
    was kind of hard to follow until i read the comment

    if i may suggest something...
    id like to say you should put what you said in your comment on your poem actually in the poem
    so that people know that you are talking about your past dogs because when i read it i was thinking that it was about a boyfriend or two boyfriends :S:S

    other then the little confusion tis a great poem

    one more thing just a tiny thing...
    i think you should throw a comma in the second stanza i think at this part...
    ''I was oh so good to you,''
    so that is is like this...
    ''I was oh, so good to you,''
    i find it makes it more dramtical type thing

    good poem:D:D

    Keenan

  • 15 years ago

    by xXHunnyGurlXx

    This poem is dedicated to my two past dogs, One in which (Hunny 11) I had had for 8 years & she was taken by kangaroos.. after following our new pup (Rusty 1) across the road, After her death he was shot by pound men a week b4 his 2nd birthday, as he was classed as a threat to our widlife...

    I will miss them both dearly. <3