This poem is dedicated to my two past dogs, One in which (Hunny 11) I had had for 8 years & she was taken by kangaroos.. after following our new pup (Rusty 1) across the road, After her death he was shot by pound men a week b4 his 2nd birthday, as he was classed as a threat to our widlife...

I will miss them both dearly. <3

Wow im sorry...
and your comment on your own poem helped me understand this poem alot more
was kind of hard to follow until i read the comment

if i may suggest something...
id like to say you should put what you said in your comment on your poem actually in the poem
so that people know that you are talking about your past dogs because when i read it i was thinking that it was about a boyfriend or two boyfriends :S:S

other then the little confusion tis a great poem

one more thing just a tiny thing...
i think you should throw a comma in the second stanza i think at this part...
''I was oh so good to you,''
so that is is like this...
''I was oh, so good to you,''
i find it makes it more dramtical type thing

good poem:D:D

Keenan