Comments : Trio (Essence)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Silvia,

    You could have easely called this one "the circle of life".

    All life is born and dies again. Joy brought to us and taken again. Storms raging and clearing the skies..all has it's place on this earth and it's meaning...even if we often don't realize what it was until we look back much later in life.

    Good poem:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Sylvia you have done a great job with this and even though it was three seperate ones they meshed together very well. Great Job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very well done indeed! I liked all three as
    well as the form you used to show nature's
    beauty..enjoyed the read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wonderful job on this forem Sylvia. All three did mesh together really well.
    Excellent!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Loved the one on Life...
    beautiful writes Sylvia :)

  • 15 years ago

    by anand singh

    We're only on this earth fpor a short while and as such we tend to live life with some joy, encounter some storm until it's our time to go back home to God.
    A wonderful piece indeed and the form of which you portray natures beuty is supeb.
    Keep up the great job Sylvia.
    Another enjoyable read from you.
    Paul...

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This entire poem relates to life is some way, very well written, I enjoyed the uniquenss of this piece... you choose a great form! Well done -

    5/5
    Temps (Beyond a Poets Mind)