by TheRapture03 Apr 29, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The road is long and the sun is hot |
by Em
An enjoyable read that as Sourav said is similar to a song, good rhythm and wording. |
by Sourav
I feel this sounds more like song. It's like lyric. Ami I wrong? Nice reading! |
by Jad
This was a very interesting poem that I found really interesting. The flow of the poem was good and so was the rhyme. The emotion in the poem was really good as well. So keep on writing and keep up the good work. |