This is a very touching piece of work you have written. Your heart felt fondness of love can be felt in these words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and work with us.

Take care,

sadaddy

I like it. Sad, but so relatable. I know just how you feel. Lovely write though. Very simple, but with that came alot of emotion. Well done.

That was soo heart felt. Dang. I feel for you. Hope you take care. god bless

Whever we lose a loved one whether it's in death or a broken relationship there is a grieving period we all must go through.
But the love, the memories of the good times, the little keepsakes of the heart lives on in our memory forever.
I can feel your pain and sorrows for your words tells of the depth of your love for this person.But having said you will see her again in your heavenly home is nothing but the Lord who has promised us thet one day we will re-unite in his garden of everlasting love and peace.
Though sad, you've penned this piece beautifully.
Take care,
Paul...

I wish this is only a poem.. it sad and i can relate.. hai it written well and beautiful... it make me sad but wow..
keep it up

I am writing to a girl I was in love with very much I miss her everyday and ty for the comment and glad this poems speakin whats in ur heart

Wow, good job. i am so so sorry for your loss... it's hard losing someone close to you, knowing that you can no longer hear the sound of their voice or feel the presence of them. stay strong and take care! because sometimes you have to hit rock bottom before you can get back up. <3