That was a wonderful write. Though love and sadness and other bleh subjects are so over-hashed and cliche, I enjoyed the creative way in which you described your love and how you feel. Definately a beautiful poem. I liked how it seemed to flow exceptionally well, even with the extensive lines and phrases. 5/5.

Wow, you really are in love lol. I adore the phrases and enthusiasm that you put into this piece and how sincere you are, and the energy just flows through the entire poem from start to finish. I actually got a boost of energy myself lol; best of luck!

Wow, you really are in love lol. I adore the phrases and enthusiasm that you put into this piece and how sincere you are, and the energy just flows through the entire poem from start to finish. I actually got a boost of energy myself lol; best of luck!

I got caught in the energy. Told you you had Talent! Congrats