A small "snapshot" of life as we see it happening. Well done.

I smiled while reading this. I could see the dad beaming at his daughter. Great job!
((hugs))
Cindy

Corinne,
It is so amazing to me what inspires you to write a poem. I shouldn't be suprised I am inspired by a lot of the same but I just can't pen them like you do. I can just picture you passing by this father and daughter and him getting her to pose around the beautiful flowers showing off her braces. Beautfiul Job.

Very sweet images, such a relevant poem! Again, love your observations and your style. I like the gentle tone in this piece, very nice! :)

I enjoyed the everyday matter of factness about this. A poloroid in poem form.

I loved reading this! ..as I could just "picture" it happening. I like your style of writing... how you can take everyday things, and craft them into a beautiful poem , that brings a smile. :] BRILLIANT!