Your poem was truly unique, short and sweet, your words were powerful and of great choice. The feelings conveyed were amazing. Nice work

This was a great write, combining both cliche lines with original ones. Using rainbows to portray something fallen, broken was creative. A wonderfully written poem, though in some parts it seemed that you were trying to hard to make the poem rhyme that it took away from it a bit. 4/5

This is so touching I can tell you put so much effort to it :] and i loved it 5/5