I can see the emotion in this poem, and I know you must think that the whole world is crushing on your head, but I think that eventually you'll move on, and if you do that soon, you'll get healed even sooner than you have ever thought it possible. I just want you to know that each and every heartbreak is a lesson we have to learn, like the pain that gets us stronger. I'll just say try to let go, the sooner you do it, the sooner you'll feel better and ready to love again.
5/5 for the emotion that flows very nicely through the poem.
Carla